1. Compare my previous rough draft, i made many revises in this new one. First of all, i cut the introduction of internet part and put it with introduction of internet addiction part as first section of my paper. The second section is definition of Internet addiction. In this part i curtailed this part very much, I Paraphrased one block quote and deleted other one. The third section is harmful effects of internet addiction; I worked very hard with this one. I made further development in this part and I am working on arrange my interview in this part. One more big change in my paper is that i rewrote my conclusion to make it more effective. All over the paper, I corrected the in-text citation and work cited page.
2. Title: The
Internet addiction: reason, definition, Influence and solution
Abstract:Internet brought us convenience and quickly information transformation
in life, however it also brought Internet addiction to people. Today internet addiction becomes a global
problem and more people dive into it. In this research paper I discuss what reasons
cause Internet addiction, how to definite, diagnose
and treat Internet addiction. Also include how the Internet addiction
influences people, treatment methods and some misunderstanding in treatment. I
will discuss different harmful effects by classified and corresponding
treatment.
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